My topic for essay 2 is informed consent.
I chose informed consent because I wanted to think about the importance of making own decision for medical treatment. We tend to think that doctors are the only one who makes the choice for treatment and are responsible for everything being done but this is not true. It is our own body that they treat so we are the ones who should be making choices. We should be given the information and the chance to choose what we want doctors to do to cure illness.
I haven't really decided my thesis statement, but for now, my thesis statement is,
"Many patients are given medical treatments without knowing about their illness, the cure for disease, and its risk however, they should be given the chance to know and decide what to be done to their body therefore informed consent is important."
While the claim shows up after the supporting points are given, the claim and supporting will function well as a thesis and basic organizational plan for our next essay.
ReplyDeleteYour topic looks really interesting since we are reading about "informed consent"! However, I thought that the reader will have a more clear image if your thesis statement has more specific ideas:)
ReplyDeleteI should restate my thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteMy thesis statement would be "All patients should be given information about their disease and the cure for it through informed consent in order to respect patients' rights to know, the right to choose what medical treatment to be done, and patients' quality of life."
your restate thesis statement seems workable and it is very clear and easy to understand:)
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